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    Need some Feedback from the experts

    Hey All,

    I'm just a amateur web site designer, have only designed web sites for my gaming squadrons. I wanted feedback and help for my main web site.

    http://www.geocities.com/sqn416/index.html

    Please take a stroll around and tell me what I can improve on. anything at all. I know the pictures are too big but besides that.

    Evan

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    I looked at this one the other day.

    Apart from the Images being way too buig for a 56k modem, I quite like it. Its not too busy, the layout is easy to use.

    Layout-wise, some of the pages (like Roster) has a link back to the main page. It would make your visitors life easier if ti contained all the links so they can 'wander about' as it were.

    I noticed you used a Claris editor. You might want to try out some others, as the standard for well-formed html has increased a lot lately.

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    Excellent Advice! Thanks!

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    A couple of things I noticed:

    On your menu bar, some of the links appear as red text. I (personal opinion here) find this a bit difficult to read on a blue/white background.

    Since I have some vision impairment, I (again, personal opinion) would like to see a slightly larger font.

    Another (admittedly minor) point: Can you rephrase the credit line at the bottom? "was designed and maintained" implies past tense, as though you are no longer involved with the site. My suggestion: leave out 'was'. That would bring the phrase into the present.

    Other than that, looks good!

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    Thanks! I'll add those points to my list of refinments.

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    Nice job.

    I noticed a missing graphic on http://www.geocities.com/sqn416/roster.html

    If you use the alt command, which is w3c standards, then people get a description of what the graphic should have been. You go img src="blabblab.gif" alt="blab blab picture." The words "blab blab picture" would show up beside the missing graphic symbol.



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